
There was a lick of cold in the air when I stepped out of the front door that early spring morning, a small reminder of the ghosts of winter. I thought, for the briefest of moments, about digging a coat from the bottom of my pile of already-packed-away winter clothes, but the sun above my head was warm enough against my shoulders and it had been far too long since the sun and I had talked without intervening layers. Slow paced, I traced a path through my concrete clad neighborhood with no particular destination in mind. The sun felt good on my back, so I took off my shirt, letting the cold and the warmth sweep over me simultaneously. I shivered slightly as the sun battled the shadows on my behalf.
Ghostly blackbird sings
a premonition of spring
hidden in the shade.
The leaves crinkled under my feet as I walked. One of my footsteps made no noise and I paused to see what there was living among the dead leaves. It was a single cherry blossom petal that must have floated here on the contradictory breeze. With nowhere to go and nothing but time, I sat down in the dead leaves by the roadside, twirling the cherry blossom petal between my fingers, feeling the cold breeze, waiting for spring. I sat there all evening. As the sunlight faded into night, I bit a piece off of the petal, then another, then another, until there was nothing left. After that, I went home, the cold breeze still lingering.
dead leaves and dry ground
all crumbling underfoot –
a delayed rebirth
At DVerse, the prompt is to write a haibun about Cold Mountain.
Photo by Imani Bahati on Unsplash
Love the way you link this with the two haiku.
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Thank you!
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Seamus I love the spirit that infuses your haibun.
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Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!!!
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I did and you’re welcome.
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This whole piece is so deliciously visceral, Seamus!
❤
David
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David, thank you! I like the idea of incorporating odd actions, like eating a leaf, into my poems. To me, it makes the experience of nature so much more personal.
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“I shivered slightly as the sun battled the shadows on my behalf.”
I luv this line. So humbling.
Enjoyed your haibun
Much love…
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That line was one of my favorite to write 🙂
All love. Thanks for reading!
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We have all been there hoping that spring has come, only to find that winter still has its own way of biting back
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